Re: Canzoni e simili_Collaborazioni Musicali

Inviato da  sitchinite il 23/2/2010 12:04:42
Allora la timbrica va benissimo, anche la 'voce' mi piace parecchio... e si capisce cosa dice
qui il nuovo testo...
e se nell' ultimo 'I let myself...' metti un pò di delay o echo diventa mitico :D

My nights never end... even with the light
my dreams carry on, bringing me joy.
And a thousand imps come out from my sleep,
isolating my room in another space and time,
and telling me of future lives
and about all the times to come.

Fairies dance around me, inviting me
to join, to their shiny world,
to let my dreams overwhelm reality,
to send crashing down every threshold...

And as the leaves are carried away by the wind
coming from far, distant memories,
a silent girl opens her arms to hold me,
in her world of brightness and love.

Fairies dance around me, inviting me
to join, to their shiny world,
to let my dreams overwhelm reality,
to send crashing down every threshold...

I let myself die in this mortal body
to sink, with the soul, in more perfect lights.

aggiungerei, se puoi, tra 'mortal body' e 'to sink' una pausa minore di quella di una virgola (ma é un dettaglietto)

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